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poem review for "still i rise"

2/10/2014

7 Comments

 
Still I Rise
~Maya Angelou

This poem was great. This poem conveyed a good message about coming back from hardships. However I didn't really like the audio that much. Aside from the Audio this poem was great and I highly reccomend reading it. The main thing that I will take away from it is that anyone is capable of pushing away the negative things that come. We must continue to rise. Now I will continue to rise. I can see why Jack Eames choose this for WW.Fenn.







7 Comments
Paul
02/19/2014 8:54am

Nice post Owen! I would make it longer, though it is meaty.

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Ben Kelly
02/19/2014 8:56am

Why challenge the length of the piece. Some need less room to express more, I certainly don't think you have a right to tell Owen anything about his posts.

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Paul
02/19/2014 8:57am

There is no accounting for taste, and pretending to be a PC Police is no good for anyone.

Quincy
02/19/2014 10:01am

Right. We don't have rights to tell Owen anything about his post. Why are we commenting again?

Ben K
02/20/2014 5:35am

To be part of an active community in which we share ideas and tell each other where we find success.

Paul
02/20/2014 5:36am

Quincy, I think you may have misread this comment stream.

Quincy
02/19/2014 10:03am

The post was nice, but I agree with Paul. It should be lengthened.

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